I read your info page and you have a couple grammatical and spelling errors. And this might just be my personal opinion, but I don't think you need to write so much about your father. I would take out the part about people waiting months for his work.
also, (i hope you don't think i am tearing your site to shreds) but the wedding pictures go by a little fast. wedding pics are a big deal and i would think customers would want to look at them closely.
yeah i have to agree. You are showcasing your photography with the motive to sell your ability. You should definately either slow the wedding stream down, or even consider using posted pics rather than the stream. My freelance clients like to really see the previous work I've done, you know clarity / color / composition.
i think what she wrote about her father is a nice touch - it shows where she learned her skillset from.
it is a nice touch, i just thought the part about ppl waiting months for him to work as their decorator seemed a little out of place that's all.
i have that in and will keep it in cause it just shows the extent of my fathers perfectionism, so much so people waited for him, so i want it to reflect on me, that i do nothing less than perfect work because i learned it from my father. i think thats actually a for lack of better word crucial part to that whole section.,
I know about the spelling errors, ,haha, ,that wasn't my doing for once, ,that was my webdesigner's fault
So you think it scrolls by to fast? I'll have to see if it can be slowed down again. in the future it will be changed it's just i dont have many pics for that section, so das why i have it scrolling by.
Gracias People!
It's like saying my dad was so good at what he did people waited for him, and he's the one who taught me all about excellant work ethic.