another broken heart song for the books
by hey every1 this is a song i just wrote the other night and i need some feedback on it try not to be too mean tho ok lol. anyway here it is.
CRAZY NIGHTS
these crazy nights never seem to end when your by urself with out ur friends these crazy nights they seem to drag on these crazy nights when will they be gone all by myself every friday night even tho every1's in sight i paint on a smile and hang for a little while but i'll soonbe home and be all alone these feeling i hide but yet i dont know why drowning in sorrow i'll be better tomorrow these nights arent so crazy there more like lonly nights with hours of pain and breaking down inside i cant stop i cant restrain the screaming in my brain these nights are like a one way train driving me insane
idk im still workin on it i'll prob add a littel more or somtin but if any1 has soemthign to say on it let me know just make sure its constructive criticism.
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the lyrics are good, but it's hard to judge w/o music
yeah, i agree. maybe some arrangement is in order. sounds good. i honestly think ian should create a therapy forum though.
haha o come on it aint that depressing
drowing in sorrow, hours of pain, breaking down inside!? now i'm a wreck here, thanks to you!
do you guys know each other at all?? you know what's weird? brian- becuase of one of your friends, i met jesse's brother, and then jesse. and here you guys are sharing feelings, and probably don't know each other
nope. i do not know this guy. but i like to think we allll have at least one friend in common-- making us all friends!
I like it a lot, even if I can't hear it I can hear it in my head.
if you sung this neked. i bet it'll be a hit. i'll buy your first record.