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ekulu by ekulu · May 16, 2004 · 155 views · · · Journal

I want her to look into my eyes.

...But nevertheless she keeps looking away, off into the night, into the crowd of people relaxin standing around the dance floor. She was looking for him. But I would look directly at her, but she wouldn't let her eyes rest upon me. This was the song where the girl was supposed to look at you, have fun, smile. She was supposed to look deeply into you. When Marco Antonio Rios sang the words "En esta noche no hay mas luna", the both of you were supposed to ascend into the star dotted sky covered inte joy and peace of that night. But I ascended, while she stayed on the ground, her heart deeply rooted in another.

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16 Comments

fivezero fivezeroOG 2003 ·

life...is not what's given to you. it's what...you...take!

hunkpapap hunkpapapOG 2003 ·

i'm not in love, it's just a phase that i'm going thru..

skaorsk8 skaorsk8OG 2002 ·

something...something...cinnamon toast crunch. but i love her. and soymilk.

ekulu ekuluOG 2002 ·

very cryptic, yet very deep. pure poetic genius

ilikebirds ilikebirdsOG 2002 ·

Thats why people go hunting and fishing. So they gather food, good tastey delicious food.

hunkpapap hunkpapapOG 2003 ·

speaking of dancing and noche, has anybody been there in the city?

socalgal socalgalOG 2003 ·

aw ekulu is this for someone special???

ekulu ekuluOG 2002 ·

haha no, not really. i just thought it was weird that when she was dancing with me she didnt even look at me. weird

socalgal socalgalOG 2003 ·

she was probably shy

ekulu ekuluOG 2002 ·

who cares? no one can resist looking at me!!

skaorsk8 skaorsk8OG 2002 ·

maybe she didn't want you to smell her breath, boy-genius.

thatdarngirl thatdarngirlOG 2002 ·

Sometimes it's hard to look at the person you're dancing with because you're sooo close to each other. Like, it's physically hard.

ekulu ekuluOG 2002 ·

lol what kind of dacing a YOU doing at parties???

socalgal socalgalOG 2003 ·

lyndz is right, sometimes it's hard to look at the person your dancing with if he's not a good friend or not your mate. sometimes when you're slow dancing and you're jsut aquaintances you look off to the side.....so lyndz got it right

aviator aviatorOG 2004 ·

Title should be "Letters from a stalker is the essence of beauty" LOL

aviator aviatorOG 2004 ·

Note: Marco Antonio Rios :)

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