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flomojopoanode by flomojopoanode · Feb 13, 2006 · 122 views · Journal

Here a few other things I've written. If you don't like one, skip to the next set. I really like the 3rd(and last) of these.

(has to do with a girl, but I don't remember which...I think it's kinda old...but I like it.)

tongue tied
heart twisted
don't know what to say
cause I'm numb to my feelings

have I brought this on myself?
self-inflicted?
am I too focused on anything
but the pain to fix it?

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(reaching wayyyyy back for these three. A close friend was leaving the truth. kinda corny.)

do what is right,
and you'll always find,
some right there,
by your side.

when put to the test
you'll always bend
don't follow your desire
you'll be put through the fire

solid, firm, tried, tested, true,
the pure of heart will not lie to you,
not fame, not money, not power, but love,
to heal, to help, to teach, to solve.
there's only one way to be pure,
no man or angel will be the cure.

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(one last one, from not too long ago, which I call "you know"--feelings from the ends of 2 relationships.)

some people say I'm just jaded,
never want to see the likes of you again,
whoa whoa, you know!

some think my hopes have faded,
you made them fade a long time ago
whoa whoa, you know!

my existense consists of this,
empty sheel-made my life a living...
well, you know!

everytime I see you again,
reminded of the things I adored in you.
and you know.

now in the hear-after,
after loves disaster
looking for someone new
stuck on bitter thoughts of you
I got so entangled,
in love-lies I've been strangled

how could you love my words, and
hate the rest of me, it hurts, and you know!

you were prep'd to break my heart
ruin my day, my month, my LIFE, and you knew
whoa whoa, you know!

so it's come to this,
wasn't there something else for you to do?
you know!

I'm left just staggering and aimless
can't say that I'm not blameless
whoa whoa, you know,

I was the stupid fool who fell for you,
it was written before it happened, because,
you knew.

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3 Comments

specialk #1 specialkOG 2003

Good stuff Todd. I liked reading it. And no, that second one wasn't corny.....just honest.

flomojopoanode #1.1 flomojopoanodeFounder

thanks, :D

hunkpapap #2 hunkpapapOG 2003

were you going for double entendre with 'hear-after'

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