another poem...becus im bored...
As I exercise these sins of lonlienessDreams are conceived in the spaces of her morrow
In order to drink the blood nations I
Must return the hunger that loves me so
But it is a terrible dream that brings you here
Small and vacant and under control
YOU
You who are and are not
Born for times of
Imminent distress
I love you, but far too much
It is made manifest in the hunger of my viens
I want to experience you every time I hear a human voice
As I run to you I allow you to deface me
Defoliated child, who’s arms wither
Hold me
That I may die with you
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You should write lyrics for julie and my band!
awww. thats really sweet. good thing is that you shall never have to die because you can live forever on a peaceful new earth.
thats beautiful.
i wonder what's this one about.
can't you tell? it's about some guy who can't get some chick because she thinks he's a loser
so it's about you?
yuppp, that's what love poems are all about right? inner gut wrenching pain, and insecurity.
hmmm, maybe it's not a love poem
it sounds like a stalker poem to me... why don't you break it down for us? sounds like you've deciphered the inner meaning of it.
IM NOT A STALKER!!!!
the bible says that sometimes you cannot see the rafter in your own eye. maybe you don't think of yourself as a stalker, but you are. its just constructive critism. but i do really like your poem.
thanks...im right outside ur house right now looking in the window...you LOOK like ur enjoying it
HAHAHAHA!! that is one of the funniest things ive ever heard! "don't take this the wrong way, and don't get all defensive because this is just constructive criticism. but you may want to try to face the facts and realize that you really are a stalker."
even though we all know you are a stalker, we do love your poem still.
Lonely air and desperate wind,
oh how I strive for you endlessly
your breathe looms over me
like a child over a yodel
oh how the skies cry out for you beauty
it says I'll rain on you if you dont watch out
i love fried chicken.
mmmm, i love me some good ole fried chicken too!!!!