A study in linguistics, and the techniques thereof
by don't question linguistics, like mind tricks,
veal garlic and breadsticks
my mind just ticks
and tocks like a jack in the box
just a hint of braintease with sugar and cheese.
i can't even swim but i'm sinking with ease
Caught in headlights, my ship writes, like flo-jo my heart flights
making the grade is never the same as it was, just because.
don't sweat the fuzz they're not here to stay
no need for your soul to be all bitter and grey
just another day in the life of your own special K.
a day in my life is like a year in yours
cuz while your fiddling on rooftops i'm knocking down doors
when i see a Question mark, i add my own stamp to it
i stand tall like like a wall and like nike just do it.
i've had the tools all along only you never knew it.
if you raise up the gate i'll pound down right through it.
cuz i'm fast like a flash of cast iron and brass
bruised, battered and beaten, but never broken like glass
time left so short like rope on a bridge
if only i could reach it like milk in the fridge
I'm gonna be somebody, I just don't know who
I hope I find out before i tear in too.
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see you guys don't need Trevor. hahaha.
I was just listening to some old-school rap, right before I read this, so I just kept the beat in my head as I read along, using the rappers voice. it was cool.
wow matt, that was....umm...good (yea, that's it) haha. Hey Mike, why don't you post your latest poem? ;)
i dont think ian would let it go up...
hey! dont you think it should be "tear in 2".
just a thought///
as in the number???!!!! what are you CRAZY!?
i have to say, i am sick of how when i pour my soul out, all i get is CRITISISM! forget this! i don't need this crap! i'm doing this for ME not you crazy press mongers!!
matt, i thought that was a pretty cool joint, don't feel bad buddy. we all appreciate your lyricism.
ian are you editing my work!? have you no respect?!!!
i tear in TOO! its a poetic lisence thing...it gives it that "double meaning, yet too deep to comprehend" thing!
HAHAHAHAHA! YES! I CHANGED IT! I ADMIT IT!
change it back dude, i did it as a joke
phew... man, how could you tamper with my poetic genius!?
matt I liked it. seriously. and if you take it seriously then what ian did was pretty awful. ya gotta have respect for art, even if your disrespect is all in fun.
from the east to the west
nothing is as best
as a rhymer who can rhyme
and makes time on a dime.
For people who were evil,
you must stop them and their medieval
uses of tech that wreck
the heart of the poetic art
how come you don't have posting capabilities dean?
okay okay, i'm sorry. i shouldn't have done that, and it won't happen again. now, should i feel guilty about formatting katie's dollar/gallon article one story up? i took her raw text and converted it into a nicely formatted table. i hope she doesn't get mad about that! (btw, i also saved her original text in case she wants to put it back, i just put it inside of an html comment in the story.)
but, anyway, i should figure out where the line falls: i do pay the bills around here, and produce much of the sweat, but i don't want to stifle user submissions because of overuseing my power.
its okay ian, i wasn't serious anyway, it is true that you are the backbone of this site, the "founding father" if you will, and you do deserve respect. But who are you to play God? ... it's all good, NBL!
haha, Ian, its not like we can kick you out, I was being semi-serious.
We all love ezabel and your efforts. no problems here.
yeah me either
Matt i think that was a cool poem!...different...but it was cool i give it a big thumbs up....everyone should
take pride and care in what they do..everything...cause it's like a form of art and it has Your signature
on it!!!!
THANKS! do I know you monamour?
hey matt...sup bro. you don't remeber me ahh man that's not cool
Maybe if i knew your REAL name. see but that's just me.