my new bad habit is that when i see a PARAGRAPH by ty, i stop after the fifth word or so, and decide it's not worth reading. HOWEVER, since this is my journal entry, i will continue on and see what it's about...that is all.
just finished reading it: *rollseyes* that figures...i shoulda stayed with the gut instict...
what is wrong with that story? so goood. i need to be a short story novelist.
that's my point: you should write short stories; not journal comments that appear to be genuine, when in fact, they are anything BUT; you malaysian!