I read your info page and you have a couple grammatical and spelling errors. And this might just be my personal opinion, but I don't think you need to write so much about your father. I would take ...

i think what she wrote about her father is a nice touch - it shows where she learned her skillset from.

it is a nice touch, i just thought the part about ppl waiting months for him to work as their decorator seemed a little out of place that's all.

i have that in and will keep it in cause it just shows the extent of my fathers perfectionism, so much so people waited for him, so i want it to reflect on me, that i do nothing less than perfect w...