yuppp, that's what love poems are all about right? inner gut wrenching pain, and insecurity.
hmmm, maybe it's not a love poem
it sounds like a stalker poem to me... why don't you break it down for us? sounds like you've deciphered the inner meaning of it.
IM NOT A STALKER!!!!
the bible says that sometimes you cannot see the rafter in your own eye. maybe you don't think of yourself as a stalker, but you are. its just constructive critism. but i do really like your poem.
thanks...im right outside ur house right now looking in the window...you LOOK like ur enjoying it
you are so frightening.
you are so frightening.
amen to that!!!!
HAHAHAHA!! that is one of the funniest things ive ever heard! "don't take this the wrong way, and don't get all defensive because this is just constructive criticism. but you may want to try to face the facts and realize that you really are a stalker."
even though we all know you are a stalker, we do love your poem still.