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ophelia Apr 1, 2004

hmm...cleverly written....but i must admit, i don't get the "punchline" or, gist of the story...

thatdarngirl Apr 2, 2004

Is there supposed to be one?

ophelia Apr 2, 2004

ok..that answers the question then..very good story!..i was glued the whole time

thatdarngirl Apr 3, 2004

Sure you were. The people in my Creative Writing class just kind of stared at me confused.

ophelia opheliaOG 2003

no, i really liked it...extreme wit..it's just the whole time, i'm looking for there to be a solid conslusion to it, like, a reason for everything that happened in the story

thatdarngirl thatdarngirlOG 2002

She was just trying to count sheep to go to sleep and it wasn't working.

ophelia opheliaOG 2003

haha, i, that i understood.....i thought maybe that that might'a been a metaphore for something....either way i liked it!..i'm being honest, lol, seriously, it flows w/cleverness

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