Whoa.. that was pretty long.. umm did anyone really read all of that ? katie i love you but i only read the BIBLe . I did, however, was able to read some of it and Though the three paragraphs i read were good.. the aspiring ENGLISH teacher in me would have not have given you a hundred .
"As a child, M.C. Escher studied to become an architect like his father. However, because of his drawing ability, he was attracted to the field of graphic art. Sadly, as with many artists, M.C. Escher’s art went unnoticed at first. However, in 1956, he had his first important exhibition, drawing even the attention of Time magazine. Because of this exhibit and review, M.C. Escher captured worldwide attention. Most importantly, Escher gained the attention of mathematicians who understood his extensive use of mathematic principles. "
THough use of transisitions are good , i believe you over did it. Starting a sentence with 'because' ? , and a little fragment'ative'.
*all said in a joking manner . i'm really not a jerk guys , i'm just oddly funny .
love ya katie .
RUFF RUFF
haha, maybe next time I shouldn't write the paper the night before it's due, huh? lol
nice.. thats what i always do.. one time i did get an A for writing a 10 pg. research paper the night before.. but that only happened once.. among 20 other times.. where i got d's
haha maybe it would just help if you did it in advance?
man, pretty long comment, ty... i would have read it, but i don't have the time.
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so ruff....
....but totally appropriate.
I agree.. ty just babbles.... SHEESH woman... hahahhaa.. kidding ty
stop hating
well the actual comment in itself wasn't long..i just qouted a whole paragraph from her..
Mr. English Teacher, Ty....my spell check doesn't recognize "qouted" as a word. hehe
lol! so harsh.
i guess you have a bad spell checker ,don't you !!!???!?!?!
how did the video shoot go ?
yeah, how come we haven't been hearing about it at all? sounds like you're hiding something!