Back wit my own spin on harsh realities,
Get rejected despite whatevah reality be!
Don't trip you aint NO prize,
Don't trip YOU aint caught my eye!
You're a bit too sure, like to tell...
flomojopoanodeMar 11, 2005
Nice! I love the flow in the last stanza.
originalsnobMar 11, 2005
Thanx but, I wasn't overly concerned by the flow...just venting.