this kinda popped into my head today. kinda inspired by busta rhymes and gnarls. lookin' over it now -- it sucks and it's lyrically and structurally asymmetrical, but hey, it was fun and i thought i'd share. i wanna see some more rappin'
sleep walkin'
[read quickly]
when you see me perform
s'like chlor'form on newborns
sleepy rhymes contr'dict the artform
s'got the girls fallin' like acorns
i play through like arnold palmer
because you know no ones calmer
sealin' deals like'n embalmer
drippin' a track quick to calm her
[slower]
lyrics like flames in slow motion
when i bottle rhymes like love potion
that'll irritate the commotion
but improve your soothe like a lotion
[hook]
when you're sleepin' i know you're dreamin' of me, when you're comin' i know you're runnin' girl gunnin' for me, i got you sleep walkin' sleep talkin' to me, cuz the beat's so mellow that you're fallin' asleep.
i like that hook alot.
not bad dude, i like the playing thru like arnold palmer line and the hook too