/shivers
Wow, dude, sounds intense.
Minor suggestion: After scene 5, cut to scene 3. End. SCIFI!
yeahhh, that scene is on notice for being a gaudy time lapse device, for being a pain in the neck to shoot, and for being just plain cheesy.
stilllll, i'll shoot it and see how it plays... it's there to remove the idea of the daydream/hole sequence and replace it with a nice, happy, cheesy couple music montage! for one, it'll give you the idea they've been together and not just thrust you into the two month anniversary...and also when you see him get drugged it's more of a surprise and you don't expect the daydream/hole sequence to end up really happening. ehhh, we'll see!
oh, wait, i misunderstood you. i read that i should cut from scene 3 to scene 5! haha, i think i read that because scene 4 is on my crap list. as for your idea... you know what they say "films are truly made in the editing room." who knows.
I was kidding around, anyway. I was implying that you show scene 3 twice, like an infinite loop.