sorry. it's a short. she's nuts. no time to show you the process.
buttt...this makes think that i'll change the anniversary scene to a "we broke up last week, but i agreed to meet you" scene. he'll tell her that it just didn't work out and why he dumped her, then she drugs him and buries him. STILL another way i might take this... is to reverse the end completely. HE asks HER to meet out there after getting dumped... then he drugs and buries her. but then the circular nature of the story is broken. i dunno. i still may scrap this whole thing. i'm fickle.
no no. the concept is great. just make her like one of those psycho chicks that wants to get married and they'll do anything to get the man. lol
i think your original concept works. maybe film some alternate scenes so you can edit it around a bit. but i think your idea is a winner the way it is.
yeah maybe a quick scene kind of leading up to the crazy
i duno
i feel like something is missing there but that's just my opinion i could be totally wrong haha