so basically she doesn't believe in herself but in actuality she is good and she got the job
good concept but I think the "self-loathing" is a bit overdone? Especially if she tells herself she hates herself. Like, being nervous, mini-anxiety-attack, etc. yesssss but i duno it seems a biiiit forced to me that it's all happening at once? I duno. it's hard to explain.
well, try to explain it to me, please. i need feedback.
tell me, mango, how exactly do YOU meltdown? lol
anddd i'm thinking of getting kiddo to do this. i'm almost afraid to ask.
lol i duno if it's just me? but it seems like the whole "panic attack, run into the bathroom to throw up" is a guy kind of response. girls, back me up.
like when a girl is unsure of herself ... i duno i talk fast and feel like a dork that's about it haha
maybe have her eat some chocolate haha
i don't know, yo. i want this to be silent, so no "oh, i feel like a dork" or any fast talking. maybe the bathroom throw up thing is a bit much. maybe i'll think of something different.
haha oh it's silent. I didn't know. Hmm maybe like runs into the bathroom and turns on the cold water as if she's gonna splash her face in it but instead lets the cold water run and just stares at herself in the mirror with an annoyed expression
girl lost in thought, hmm that sounds like something i would do hahaha
and then maybe the toilet flushes or someone comes in so she kinda jolts out of it and takes a deep breath, turns off the water, moves on, i duno haha.
how bout pan over to the toilet and theres a big deuce in there... then zoom in real tight on it
HAHAHA! that would be completely unexpected and awesome. i know how to make a hollywood duece too. take 3 snickers bars, 4 peanut butter cups, and a payday and put them in the microwave for 7 seconds. take them out and mold up a good sized log. it looked perfectttt. it definitely would have made me gag if it didn't spell so freaking good.
nice!!! if that's the case, then have her reach in and take a bite... then turn to the camera and say "IT'S DELICIOUS!! MY PERSONAL PROBLEMS ARE RESOLVED!!" - fin annnnddd credits
you've inspired me. i'm going to make a real short movie with a log like that. i'll do it this weekend and post it on monday or tuesday. it looks really GROSS, BUT we DID eat it! shoulda filmed it. actually, i don't know how people would react to watching people eat a chocolate peanuty nougat turd.... we'll see. ian just might scrape that one too, lol.
well i'm glad (and surprised) that my stupid ideas have inspired you
it just reminded me of good times.
I like this idea. It's more realistic... but it has been done so many times on film!
i know exactly how my wife has a "melt down", and have asked other women about when that happens to them ... exact same symptoms and actions.
that's been my experience and i don't think i was being over the top either. i'll ask more girls.
hmm yeah its possible that i just never had a true meltdown? haha i duno. or i'm weird.
i dunno i think its pretty realistic. maybe more pacing and compulsive paper shuffling and relooking over papers. i think the throwing up thing is normal. i've had it happen before when i'm supernervous or anxious.
yeah maybe it's just me, nevermind don't listen to me brian
oh, yeah, just to let you know the "i hate you" in the mirror thing won't be added. that's a bit much.