mesmerize me with your deepest eyes
exploring the insides my heart
find that there are no lies
knowing i 'liked' you from the start
captivate me with your sweetest smile
as it can cheer a thousand souls
rendering me senseless like a child
and keeping me smiling a thousand fold
embrace me with your caring touch
for without it, my wounds woud never heal
without it, my pain would hurt too much
without you i would never again learn to feel
bless me with your gentle kiss
and taste the joy of my soul in bliss
That poem's captivating. Excellent writing there, bro.
ty, i love this poem soooo much, it's awesome
yeah, this is cool & all(i actually liked it a lot), but I was caught off gaurd by the lack of off-color humor, and nonsensical rambling we've come to love you for so much...
time and place for everything. and ezabel is a time and place for stupidness...woo hoo
And its a sonnet...I'm impressed!!
not a true sonnett. but does the job
Well, get your practice on. That's how they used to woo the ladies, ya know,
wow that was heartwarming. i may dream about you tonight.
get in line