i'm with gfs on that.. it's like the guys driving.. can't see the stop sign.. keeps going.. gets hit directly on the side.. glass flies right into his ears .. cuts him .. starts bleeding.. he starts crying.. and then the shovel is his burial...
i don't like it.
it's like :
Hard Shell
Pecks Corn
I'm A frying pan
you guys are so off its humorous.
oh, it actually has a meaning?
haha it's humrous that there's a real meaning.. i was just trying to make fun of you because i think it's horrible.
hahaha...Im with Ty no that one..hahaha A MEANING!! hahaha
i think its a really cool poem. it's not cliche at all which makes it interesting to read. it's not like:
I miss you my baby, i wish you were here
because when i think of you, i always shed a tear
i love you so much, that i just can't go on
the dog from accross the street just pooped on my lawn.
see i'm so original, that i can only go on being cliche for so long, before something new and exciting pops out.
you think you're original but you're really not,
you frustrate me, i want to hit you with a pot
so stop your yapping and get a life
before i stab you with my knife
i hate you so much i need to eat
oops i think i just wet my seat
LIke that.
pretty much
no ur both dumb....