i'm with gfs on that.. it's like the guys driving.. can't see the stop sign.. keeps going.. gets hit directly on the side.. glass flies right into his ears .. cuts him .. starts bleeding.. he start...

it's like : Hard Shell Pecks Corn I'm A frying pan

you guys are so off its humorous.

haha it's humrous that there's a real meaning.. i was just trying to make fun of you because i think it's horrible.

i think its a really cool poem. it's not cliche at all which makes it interesting to read. it's not like: I miss you my baby, i wish you were here because when i think of you, i always she...