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sux2beme by sux2beme · Apr 29, 2002 · 108 views · Journal

Have You Ever...?

july '89


Have you ever seen the sun

     in the middle of the day

Towering over the earth

     with its soothing rays?

Have you ever seen the clouds

     billowing above

Reminding us of softness

     and beauty and love?

Have you ever noted the vastness

     of the great blue sky

A giant canvas of color

     so elegant, you sigh?

Have you ever looked at the stars

     as they shine in the night?

How colorful they are --

     some dim, some bright.

Have you ever seen the moon

     as it crosses the sky

So quiet and gentle

     as it passes on by?

Have you ever wondered how long

     these things have been

Or how many before

     have gazed up and said:

"Have you ever seen the sun

     in the middle of the day

Towering over the earth

     with its soothing rays?"

bwp

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13 Comments

rocksupastar #1 rocksupastarFounder

I'm crying..... that was just SOOOO beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!

deanh77 #2 deanh77Founder

since when is white on black colorful?

sux2beme #2.1 sux2bemeOG 2002

haven't u heard of black and white rainbows?

ilikebirds #3 ilikebirdsOG 2002

hmmm... yea i like the moon... i mean without the moon i wouldn't be able to see anyones butt. so thank goodness for the moon. i like the moon. i'm moon you all right now !

sux2beme #3.1 sux2bemeOG 2002

anyone know why showing off ur buttocks is called 'mooning'? i mean, it doesn't LOOK like the moon. it doesn't SMELL like the moon. it doesn't FEEL like the moon. it doesn't SOUND like the moon. and i'm pretty sure it doesn't TASTE like the moon.

ilikebirds #3.1.1 ilikebirdsOG 2002

how do you know what the moon tastes like..are you an astronaut. anyway i'm pretty sure it feels like the moon.. and it's called the moon because it shows off all aspects of the moon.. you have the FULL MOON.. the NEW MOON.. and you have the crecent moon.. the crack. oh the moon... a beautiful thing.

sux2beme #3.1.1.1 sux2bemeOG 2002

i said i was 'pretty sure'...but i'm not definite

malibu #3.1.1.2 malibuOG 2001

i am so hysterical laughing just because you took such careful time to relate human anatomy to the moon. and with the cresent moon and the crack. hahha

thefunkyfresh #3.1.1.3 thefunkyfreshFounder

stop trying to touch my moon ty

G
#3.1.1.4 goldmineOG 2002

I dont think knowing what the moon tastes like is the wierd part of the comment thai!

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#4 nine9starOG 2001

i LOVE it

prozacchick #5 prozacchickOG 2002

very beautiful....two thumbs up and a great big yellow star

sux2beme #5.1 sux2bemeOG 2002

thanks... 

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