apathy
by a mans soft eyes
are desensetized
and left blue-stone cold
hard like ice until
they cannot be made to see anything
like new anymore
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i like it. did you write that?
yeah, i'm glad you like it :)
this is really good!
apathy...same as my feelings about this dumb poem? who wrote this, a 3 year old?
Who asked you anyway? If you don't like this site, anyone on it, or anything written here, then get off loser. oh yeah, interesting how you won't allow comments on your hmmm... journal. Probably b/c you know everyone would have much more intelligent things to say in return than you have to say in general.
well i'm sooo glad to know u passed 11th grade english. great vocabulary!! But seriously, hush.
yes, sir! ok, i'm finished. it's useless to talk to morons.
useless to talk to mormons??? oh, OHH, haha. Well then stop talking to yourself.
you are gay. ok, my silence is back on.
"you are gay"...is that your much more intelligent thing you have to say?
lynz, they're bein me and you.
that's what I was thinking
thanks retard! you know that would have hurt if you were seriously critiquing it, but since you are just some stupid kid with a nose that looks like a cucumber, i really don't care what you think. THANKS!
haha, guys cmon... who cares... hahaha... matt.. good stuff, as always... and alex.. . funky fresh writes some CRAZY good poetry... im telling ya man this is a simple but COOL poem man!
HAHAHAHA this is getting funny! the Gooble kid has something to prove! who the heeze is this kid? Its always way cool to talk to people you meet online!
I know. I think this is all kinda funny.
kewl! i don't remember reading a guy's poem about a guy...hmmm
a mans toes
are cold
he can not feel them
so he wears socks
the world feels warmer.
ahh, ahH, aHH, AHH, HAIKU!!!! *sniff, sniff*