i wonder what's this one about.

can't you tell? it's about some guy who can't get some chick because she thinks he's a loser

so it's about you?

yuppp, that's what love poems are all about right? inner gut wrenching pain, and insecurity.

hmmm, maybe it's not a love poem

it sounds like a stalker poem to me... why don't you break it down for us? sounds like you've deciphered the inner meaning of it.

IM NOT A STALKER!!!!

the bible says that sometimes you cannot see the rafter in your own eye. maybe you don't think of yourself as a stalker, but you are. its just constructive critism. but i do really like your poem.

thanks...im right outside ur house right now looking in the window...you LOOK like ur enjoying it