i wonder what's this one about.

can't you tell? it's about some guy who can't get some chick because she thinks he's a loser

so it's about you?

yuppp, that's what love poems are all about right? inner gut wrenching pain, and insecurity.

hmmm, maybe it's not a love poem

it sounds like a stalker poem to me... why don't you break it down for us? sounds like you've deciphered the inner meaning of it.

IM NOT A STALKER!!!!

the bible says that sometimes you cannot see the rafter in your own eye. maybe you don't think of yourself as a stalker, but you are. its just constructive critism. but i do really like your poem.

HAHAHAHA!! that is one of the funniest things ive ever heard! "don't take this the wrong way, and don't get all defensive because this is just constructive criticism. but you may want to try to f...