hmm...cleverly written....but i must admit, i don't get the "punchline" or, gist of the story...

Is there supposed to be one?

ok..that answers the question then..very good story!..i was glued the whole time

Sure you were. The people in my Creative Writing class just kind of stared at me confused.

no, i really liked it...extreme wit..it's just the whole time, i'm looking for there to be a solid conslusion to it, like, a reason for everything that happened in the story