i just don't see how we can keep it up for a long time...

good thing i'm no longer a mime

I juggle tho so hand me a kiwi or or a lime

I'm gonna go clean up all the grime

Just don't put it past it's prime

whaddya know, its about that time

"time" with "time", you should not rhyme

I know you rhymed with prime but sometime before that it was time i'm very anal about rhyme

Keep steady the chime

you're rhyming is a crime

will you please stop if i give you a dime?

i'll take you , you sure are fine

haha you're jsut giving me a line.....

you're like rungs on a ladder, a step above the rest-shine

throw yo hands up in the air & show what gang you represent in yo cadillac w/you gangsta lean as you recline

if it was the great tribulation and trees where all we had left on earth to eat i'd eat pine

"where" doesn't work in that sentence, if you had used "were" it would have been fine