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iwz Sep 21, 2007

/shivers Wow, dude, sounds intense. Minor suggestion: After scene 5, cut to scene 3. End. SCIFI!

fivezero Sep 21, 2007

yeahhh, that scene is on notice for being a gaudy time lapse device, for being a pain in the neck to shoot, and for being just plain cheesy. stilllll, i'll shoot it and see how it plays... it'...

fivezero fivezeroOG 2003

oh, wait, i misunderstood you. i read that i should cut from scene 3 to scene 5! haha, i think i read that because scene 4 is on my crap list. as for your idea... you know what they say "films are truly made in the editing room." who knows.

iwz iwz

I was kidding around, anyway. I was implying that you show scene 3 twice, like an infinite loop.

fivezero fivezeroOG 2003

i knew what you meant. how about i loop it and at the end of the second loop... HE drugs and buries HER!

interesting.

iwz iwz

no, no, don't do that. much more interesting the way you've written it.

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