whenever i write, most of my stuff sounds like emo, although i don't intend it to be, it just comes out that way. need to work on that. anyway, here's one of mine. "Just Be Yourself" (6-15-03) ...

This reminds me or "Everything to Everyone" by Everclear and "Acoustic #3" by the Goo Goo Dolls.

i don't listen to them, is my poem very alike to their songs?

Um, nooo. You definitely don't sound like you're imitating them. The theme of his poem is just the same: She's [I assume its a guy talking to a girl] so busy trying to create a false persona , in...