Ty Pham's MOVIE - UPDATE!
by My directing/acting debut. The story of a girl who cried a river. Abandoned by family she thought loved her. Abandoned by friends. Then along comes a stranger. Dark short and handsome stranger. Befriends the be-wildered suicidal girl.
Changes her life.
Ok so i have to create a short movie for a SCHOLARSHIP.. i'm so excited about this, because i've always wanted to be a director / actor in a movie. This is going to be great. This can lead to big things for me!!! haha.. so now i'm looking for actors and actresses who want to be famous!!!! because my movie is going to be hottaaa !!!
Roles will include:
2 or more guys in the role of "ignoring girl, making fun of"
2 or more girls in role of "abandoning girl , too cool for you"
mother and father in role of "too busy for girl..."
another girl in role of "suicidal girl, intelligent, yet low self esteemed, victim of some abuse..maybe"
ME Typham "handsome dark stranger.. who befreinds suicide girl".
MEGAN - has opted to play the role of SUICIDE GIRL.. i can take other auditions if need be ~~~
I can take suggestions on scripts.. role changes.. any input is good input let me know
So far : girl in school...boys ignore her.. girls make fun of her.. she gets good grades.. maybe some flashbacks to child abuse.. maybe.. then father mother too busy working.. blah blah blah ignore her.. meets me one day on street... take her out for some coffee.. explain to her my life sucks too but i deal with it.. show her the rainbow on the other side when you enter a relationship.. how joyful that can be.. her outlook changes.. story over ...
GOOD ?
SCenario 2 !!!update!!!
starts off girl on couch .. loud fighting going on with parents.. but can't see.. only see her and fride in kitchen in the back ground.. loud fighting goes on.. see's mother thrown into fridge.. triggers her flash back of being terribly abused ..in black and white.. flash back ends with camera on tears of 12 yrs. suicide girl. back to present. girl yells stop stop stop..loses it.. thinks to self.. as tears roll.. blanket over head. loses it.. decides to jump out of 3rd story window in apartment.. there i happen to be.. confused by whats going on.. tries to catch her .. ends up breaking her bones.. or whatever..i go to hospital with her.. show her that a stranger can care for life.. and help her. she goes back home.. talks to parents..
ends.
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i can be one of the "abandoning girls"...abandoning megan! lol
ok..
do you not want me to? cuz i dont HAVE to...
i kinda just changed up the script.. this is an ongoing script writing. i need input.. so.. we'll see.. i'm not sure.. what i'm going to do..
i definately want to incorporate a memeber outside her family doing something disheartening to her.. any suggestions..to fit into scenario 2 ?
Maybe her & her best friend get into a fight. instead of having a popular girl dissing her, maybe its her best friend who's mad at her (inwhich... i can play that part!)
YES !! i like that idea.. love it !! good stuff..
acutally i'll have her use you as her "COMFORTER" to the problem but you are too busy.. and kind of push her off...
you're gonna have a pretty dark movie there. all intense, and uncomfortable. i guess you like the dramatic more than the comedic, and that's cool. remember you only have five minutes. don't make it feel like it's rushed.
thats exactly what i told him! man, me and you ian... one mind
well it starts off dark and lightens up with a few jokes in the conversation between befriending guy and suicide girl.. makes like seem good.
i can be the unbelieveably hot guy that is not only good looking, but sensitive, and all around amazing
funky.. that type of person doesn't fit in this script.. unless you want to be the guy who helps out suicide girl. and that way i can concentrate on my directing !!!
only if this is a kissing movie!
No no kissing.. the dark and intense part will involve her life.. but then it changes to comedic and happy when you meet her.. crack a few jokes about life.. she giggles.. turns the movie light...
so that you start off sad and teary ending up lighthearted.. see what i'm saying.
and as the moonlight hits her eyes, and reflects off of her tears of joy, i brush her hair out of her eyes. our faces are mere inches apart as we stare into each others eyes....... TY IT WOULD WORK! lol
hey.. i wanna rival megan for the pathetic girl!!! well.. is there any kissing? cause.. ty.. ur a good lookin guy and all.. but, i dont like ya THAT much!
lol! mike, if you're the girl, i'm definitely not gonna audition for this
how good do you look in stiletto's and a teddy ?
EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW MIKE WOULD NOT MAKE A GOOD LOOKING GIRL!
it's the double (butt) chin
hey man.. dont be dissing the chin... your just jealous!
mike has two chins ?
never noticed..
yea man.. its my patented look.. its rico suave.. sorta kinda.. cept im ugly otherwise.. hahaha
so.. who's gonna play the father? Hulk Hogan? cause he has to throw the mother "on to" the refrigerator. That's kinda hard to do. I mean lifting her up there would be one thing....
oh wait, you meant "into". how could I have possibly missed that. geese.
*honk* *honk* *gobble* *honk*
shut up before i glance your fance with my foot
fance in my language means FACE.. .had a little flashback sorry
dean i'm going to cast you as the FATHER ROLE !!! and either anna or kamila as the mother...
can I be rude and condescending?? oh please oh please.
hey I'm married to an ulatowska? alright!!!
HAHA.. dean of course you are going to be rude and condescending.. you're going to be beating her !!!! how great is that.. i love it !
nah, I can't hit a woman. or even pretend to. its toatlly against my nature. I'm a lover, not a fighter.
lover ? huh .. what ? you sure.. no you are an arguer.. and you'd love to beat any women.. shut up. there's no one here to impress
well... you can't "love" your own daughter! that's just sick man!
no no .. megan is the daughter.. dean will be beating his wife..mother to megan...
hmm... in that case, i can see how portraying dean as a "lover" would be much more traumitizing to her
Im definitly likeing the 2nd script, but I was thinking if you could make it all a flashback? You know, have the sucidal girl and you talking years later and all of a sudden you guys reminice and boom, you go into the heart of the script. I can visually see it, but the 5 min restraint is killing my vision. Man, I see great potential for this movie. The sucidal girl has no boyfriend? What if you would make it that her boyfriend cheated on her (Which would give her the sense that something was wrong with her and thats why he cheated), her BF got into a horrible fight with her, and the whole parents thing. That would seem to have a better affect, because now here you are saving her from the suicide, and she is more willing to think about what you say, cause now she knows it wasnt her fault for the whole boyfriend thing and that you are a guy who does care about her? If you need that boyfriend part, Im willing to make a cameo...I usually dont make many appearences, cause Im better behind the script, but Im willing to provide some visual aid to the part.
hmm wow, i actually think he's got a good idea....
(this is a first people) lol
I know right.. i'm thinking about just making a full length feature and forget the 5 minutes.. .. because it so interesting.. i've always wanted to direct.. me and you can be the next matt damon and ben affleck.. i call DAMON!! anyway
there's so much i want to do.. but you scenario would take up too much time.. i was actually thinking that at first.. with the whole guys abandoning her plot..but for time sake i took that out.
Wait wait, Dean as my father, isn't that going slightly beyond abuse, and who's he gonna throw into a refrigerator, I mean c'mon, he'd be able to glance her against it at best.
HAHAHA!
And since when did the short, dark and hansome lead turn into the tall, blond and goofy one? I mean, I could handle a love scene with Ty, but Matt Kelly...that's a stretch of the imagination.
why does everybody these days feel like its their job to be dissing me!!?? man! all i do is dispense love, and you people just HATE HATE HATE!!
sorry about that nasty thought MEGAN , matts fired !
yea well dean is old.. he looks the oldes out of all of us.. give him a pipe and thats that.. true about that glance thing.. DEAN you have to work out before production.. alright man !!! you have to get buff
dude there's no way I wil lbe able to throw megan on top of a refridgerator. I'm sorry.
Guy it's into not onto.. it hasn't been ONTO in awhile.. re-read.. bum..and plus you're not throwing megan.. your throwing an ulatowksa girl... and maybe anna.. we all know she only weighs 45.7 lbs.
so, will the fridge door be opened and the girl will actually be thrown into the fridge, and then closed inside of it?
Alright everyone relax.. . she will be THROWN AGAINST The fridge !!! alright is that better.. geez.. man.. geez
AHAHAHAHAH. good one IAN! nice, taking over the sarcastic nit-picking. I love it.
Ian I think you should revert the story to it's original wording so I can continue to laugh at my joke. "thrown onto the fridge" ah-hahahahaha. anyway.
yea real funny dean real funny.. need i remind you that you cant throw anything either into or onto the fridge.. only "glance" as megan said.
I've always had a thing for movies and I would love to help aid this project along. So, instead of a full scene, you should start it off as her on the phone with her boyfriend and him telling her that his feelings toward her has changed. Then you get her to call up her best friend about it and she then gets into a huge fight with her over the phone. So now she is all depressed and down, so she goes downstairs to clear up her mind and its at the same moment her father comes home (possibly drunk) and starts fighting with her mother...or you can twist and make her mother (possibly drunk) start fighting with the father, either way, one thing leads to another and there is some spousal abuse, during these meaningless comments back and forth a comment comes out about how their daughter not doing something correctly, which would put more would on the fire, at that point she runs up stairs to clear everything in her life, and just at that moment you are walking by and look-up and see her about to leap, so you start screaming, "Dont Jump, Dont Jump!!" but she ignores you and leaps anyway and then you make a miraculous dash to catch her and you do, but the impact of her fall landing on you causes the both of you to go to the hospital, and thats were you rationalize her situation and how important life is. What do you think?
"put more would on the fire" huh Giac? How about wood.
someone actually read all of that? geese.
yea.. geez.. megan sure doesn't have a life !!!!!
megan so funny .. so funny.. but not as FUNNY AS I AM...
I will have to admit going to college hasnt made me smarter at all, actually I think Im getting dumber, and w/out spell check its pretty difficult to write something that long and it actually come out grammatically correct.
okay, here's an idea. how about the girl is close to suicide, so you start talking her out of it. you call the suicide hotline, you dial the wrong number for some reason, as if some force willed you to do it. the number you actually dial is Dr. Kevorkian!
after she talks to Dr. Kevorkian for a while, not realizing it's the wrong number, she realizes that Dr. Kevorkian is her real father! she was only adopted by her current parents. so her real father on the phone tries to talk her out of commiting suicide, simply so that he can recruit her to become one of his hotline death-dealers. He then tries to get you too, and tells you that you and the girl are twin brother and sister!
You both resist, and hang up the phone after you realize what's going on. Then you go on a quest to bring your father back from his wicked ways, and turn him on the path of helping others to live, instead of die!!!
DO IT!
and then you all go on the jerry springer show!
5 minutes.. good idea.. but in 5 minutes? it'll be rough .. i'll try
haha, i hope everybody realizes that this is just a joke.. a spoof on Star Wars...
MEGANNNNN.....I AM YOUR FAAAAAAATHOOOR!
As the great director that i am.. i've decided to use the actors/actresses strengths.. megan can sing and an all around rennansionce woman.. so maybe i can incorporate that in their some how.. i already have a great letter writing.. hearing the though.. sucicde letter thing.. SO GOOD !!
"hearing the though" = " hearing the thought"
I've decided that it's going to be ONE PERSON CAN MAKE A DIFFERENCE .. GOOD OR BAD.. .and i'm gonna end up making the girl commit suicide...
i mean aren't we all sick of the happy endings.. good over evil always..
sometimes the bad guys come up with amazing unbreakable schemes.. and somehow NEo just comes along and defeats.. i don't understand
yeah but then why would we go see movies? to see the bad guys win? forget that junk!
well our lives are so happy and fine.. anyway so why not go to see a movie where it might be realistic that the murderer gets away.. look at OJ..
So the question is when will this movie start production.. i guess when DEAN bulks up enough to be able to throw a woman against a fridge
I'm almost there, but I can't psychologically do it. I think I'll need to be beaten twice daily for 3 weeks by a woman before I can attempt that.
geez..apparently you aren't a good actor then are you.. you won't be really doing this.. you'll be ACTING.. remember you also have to beat a 12 yr old too.. can you do that.?? remember "acting" !!!! and how do you feel about nude shots ? i mean of course it fits in the script and vital to the role ... !
so what's the deal with this movie? you gonna make it?
yea i'm going to make it.. just a lot or preproduction stuff.. like writing a script
Just a little idea for the script - when her mum is like thrown into the fridge she calls out to her daughter to help her, but the vision is all too close to home as she has a flash back of her dad abusing her and calling to her mum for help but her mum just ignores her. and then on with ur bit
MUM, i hate that word.. it's like a MUM-MY .. but not.. i'm so scared
on a seriuos note.. when can production begin.. i wanna shoot it in JANUARY.. drama movies are always better taking place in the COLD.. you can't have drama with people wearing shorts and t-shirts..
so JAN it is..
and everything is more dramatic when you can see the actors' breath
yea exactly .. so we're going to have to capture all of this.. i can't wait..
i might even make the movie longer for fun.. hand in the 5 minute movie.. but keep the longer movie and enter it into like the SUNDANCE film festival or something.. should be sweeet
sorry, im british, its what we british do .............. scare the american rofl ;-)
made YOU ! look
erm Pardon ;-)?
made you look again !
yer so annoying.
hahaha
stop! it's annoying. hahaha, and so was THIS. and THIS! and THIS!!! okay... i'll stop. toodaloo!
whats annoying.. no one reads this unless they are BORED or have no life !!
tina's going to be the first to comment.. watchh....
LOL! MUAHAHHAAhahaHAHHAHAH i yam the first... im BORED...therefore i have no life.
What I wonder is, what makes us go back to check if there are any new postings on old stories?
boredum - im writing somehting meaningful
you think what you just wrote was meaningful??
STOP STINKIN REPLYING TO EVERYTHING I SAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey, thats what the "Reply to comment" button is about...duhh!!