Skip to main content
eZabel
Login
0 online
Forum / & just like that, I'm writing a book View full thread →
fivezero Apr 2, 2004

use smaller words

ophelia Apr 3, 2004

too wordy?..explain

fivezero Apr 3, 2004

reading it, i dunno, i guess it didn't flow sometimes. some of the big words were piled up and it hindered the fluidity for me. otherwise, it's pretty good. i like writing that doesn't make sens...

ophelia opheliaOG 2003

it bounces back & forth cause at times i'll like throw my own thoughts on the situation in, like narrative style - but i guess the best way to describe it would be omniscient

← View full thread

Welcome Back to eZabel

It's been a while. Here's what's new.

eZabel Lore

A complete history of our community — stats, Hall of Fame, legendary threads, and more.

View the Lore →

Everything Preserved

All 225,969 pieces of content from 2000–2014 are here — forums, messages, journals, photos, polls, and events.

💎

Gems

Spot something you love — a legendary comment, a classic thread, a great photo? Log in and click the diamond icon to mark it as a Gem. Add a note about why it's special. The best stuff surfaces on the Gems page.