Im definitly likeing the 2nd script, but I was thinking if you could make it all a flashback? You know, have the sucidal girl and you talking years later and all of a sudden you guys reminice and boom, you go into the heart of the script. I can visually see it, but the 5 min restraint is killing my vision. Man, I see great potential for this movie. The sucidal girl has no boyfriend? What if you would make it that her boyfriend cheated on her (Which would give her the sense that something was wrong with her and thats why he cheated), her BF got into a horrible fight with her, and the whole parents thing. That would seem to have a better affect, because now here you are saving her from the suicide, and she is more willing to think about what you say, cause now she knows it wasnt her fault for the whole boyfriend thing and that you are a guy who does care about her? If you need that boyfriend part, Im willing to make a cameo...I usually dont make many appearences, cause Im better behind the script, but Im willing to provide some visual aid to the part.
hmm wow, i actually think he's got a good idea....
(this is a first people) lol
I know right.. i'm thinking about just making a full length feature and forget the 5 minutes.. .. because it so interesting.. i've always wanted to direct.. me and you can be the next matt damon and ben affleck.. i call DAMON!! anyway
there's so much i want to do.. but you scenario would take up too much time.. i was actually thinking that at first.. with the whole guys abandoning her plot..but for time sake i took that out.
Wait wait, Dean as my father, isn't that going slightly beyond abuse, and who's he gonna throw into a refrigerator, I mean c'mon, he'd be able to glance her against it at best.
HAHAHA!
And since when did the short, dark and hansome lead turn into the tall, blond and goofy one? I mean, I could handle a love scene with Ty, but Matt Kelly...that's a stretch of the imagination.
why does everybody these days feel like its their job to be dissing me!!?? man! all i do is dispense love, and you people just HATE HATE HATE!!
sorry about that nasty thought MEGAN , matts fired !
yea well dean is old.. he looks the oldes out of all of us.. give him a pipe and thats that.. true about that glance thing.. DEAN you have to work out before production.. alright man !!! you have to get buff
dude there's no way I wil lbe able to throw megan on top of a refridgerator. I'm sorry.
Guy it's into not onto.. it hasn't been ONTO in awhile.. re-read.. bum..and plus you're not throwing megan.. your throwing an ulatowksa girl... and maybe anna.. we all know she only weighs 45.7 lbs.
so, will the fridge door be opened and the girl will actually be thrown into the fridge, and then closed inside of it?
Alright everyone relax.. . she will be THROWN AGAINST The fridge !!! alright is that better.. geez.. man.. geez
AHAHAHAHAH. good one IAN! nice, taking over the sarcastic nit-picking. I love it.
Ian I think you should revert the story to it's original wording so I can continue to laugh at my joke. "thrown onto the fridge" ah-hahahahaha. anyway.
yea real funny dean real funny.. need i remind you that you cant throw anything either into or onto the fridge.. only "glance" as megan said.
I've always had a thing for movies and I would love to help aid this project along. So, instead of a full scene, you should start it off as her on the phone with her boyfriend and him telling her that his feelings toward her has changed. Then you get her to call up her best friend about it and she then gets into a huge fight with her over the phone. So now she is all depressed and down, so she goes downstairs to clear up her mind and its at the same moment her father comes home (possibly drunk) and starts fighting with her mother...or you can twist and make her mother (possibly drunk) start fighting with the father, either way, one thing leads to another and there is some spousal abuse, during these meaningless comments back and forth a comment comes out about how their daughter not doing something correctly, which would put more would on the fire, at that point she runs up stairs to clear everything in her life, and just at that moment you are walking by and look-up and see her about to leap, so you start screaming, "Dont Jump, Dont Jump!!" but she ignores you and leaps anyway and then you make a miraculous dash to catch her and you do, but the impact of her fall landing on you causes the both of you to go to the hospital, and thats were you rationalize her situation and how important life is. What do you think?
"put more would on the fire" huh Giac? How about wood.
someone actually read all of that? geese.
yea.. geez.. megan sure doesn't have a life !!!!!
megan so funny .. so funny.. but not as FUNNY AS I AM...
I will have to admit going to college hasnt made me smarter at all, actually I think Im getting dumber, and w/out spell check its pretty difficult to write something that long and it actually come out grammatically correct.