/shivers Wow, dude, sounds intense. Minor suggestion: After scene 5, cut to scene 3. End. SCIFI!

yeahhh, that scene is on notice for being a gaudy time lapse device, for being a pain in the neck to shoot, and for being just plain cheesy. stilllll, i'll shoot it and see how it plays... it'...

oh, wait, i misunderstood you. i read that i should cut from scene 3 to scene 5! haha, i think i read that because scene 4 is on my crap list. as for your idea... you know what they say "films a...

I was kidding around, anyway. I was implying that you show scene 3 twice, like an infinite loop.