so basically she doesn't believe in herself but in actuality she is good and she got the job good concept but I think the "self-loathing" is a bit overdone? Especially if she tells herself she h...

well, try to explain it to me, please. i need feedback. tell me, mango, how exactly do YOU meltdown? lol anddd i'm thinking of getting kiddo to do this. i'm almost afraid to ask.

lol i duno if it's just me? but it seems like the whole "panic attack, run into the bathroom to throw up" is a guy kind of response. girls, back me up. like when a girl is unsure of herself ... ...

i don't know, yo. i want this to be silent, so no "oh, i feel like a dork" or any fast talking. maybe the bathroom throw up thing is a bit much. maybe i'll think of something different.

haha oh it's silent. I didn't know. Hmm maybe like runs into the bathroom and turns on the cold water as if she's gonna splash her face in it but instead lets the cold water run and just stares at ...