that was too long to read
haha, you should read it...very funny.
i'm sorry dude. i'm just not a very concise person. i'm fairly long-winded even. if at any point you get bored reading what i write, feel free to stop reading and find a pop-up book to look at.
hey, you've been telling me you would write this journal two weeks ago. don't let the english professors get you down, or you will become downtrodden and never write again.
well no, personally I think the problem isn't the length of your story but the shrunken attention span of our generation!!...a point-click flick of a swtich fast food drive through gota have it now cause 5 minutes from now wont do buncha punks....that's all we are.....haha...PUNKS!!..ALL OF US!!..(i include myself in the "us", we all are affected by this trend to a degree)
yeah that last comment was definately supposed to be a reply to #11...I dunno what went down there