well no, personally I think the problem isn't the length of your story but the shrunken attention span of our generation!!...a point-click flick of a swtich fast food drive through gota have it now cause 5 minutes from now wont do buncha punks....that's all we are.....haha...PUNKS!!..ALL OF US!!..(i include myself in the "us", we all are affected by this trend to a degree)
yeah that last comment was definately supposed to be a reply to #11...I dunno what went down there