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toxicgirl Oct 15, 2003

I had to read it twice, for some reason I needed to to go over it again to make the connection between characters-I don't know why, it was pretty clear. I liked the intro the best. And a side note,...

thatdarngirl Oct 15, 2003

Yes he was..but when I started writing it I didn't plan on it being a Tiger..I just kind of wrote.

ophelia Oct 15, 2003

So you were basically tring to BAMBOOSLE the reader into thinking this kid's dad was in jail...and then, bam, the plot twists as the story ends & you find out he's a zoo keeper....

thatdarngirl Oct 15, 2003

Um..yes, that's pretty much what I was going for.

ophelia Oct 15, 2003

I wonder if anybody else picked that up....(oh & a lil side note, could you stop posting excerpts from my autobiography & calling them your stories)

thatdarngirl Oct 15, 2003

Your dad's best friend was in jail but really ended up being a tiger?

ophelia opheliaOG 2003

It's a very long story..You seem to have posted the condensed version here to pasify our shorter attention spans....The real story includes swash-buckling action, damselles in distress, a mime afflicted w/asthma, murder, betrayal, and two dozen blueberry muffins.....

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