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TheLittleBusWithTheTintedWindows

hollyhox by hollyhox · Mar 2, 2002 · 131 views · · · Journal

My brother kidnapped my van, forcing me to walk. So with my coat collar flipped up and my hands stuffed in my pockets, i stepped out into the cold. A deep breath of that bitter air tasted great with the lingering sweet touch of wine in my mouth. I took this opportunity of silence to think about everything on my mind. Occasionally when i was onto something, words would leak out and i'd find myself talking to myself. I think i was onto something- It doesn't take a beautiful guy to win over a great girl. I don't think anyway.


when i awoke in the morning i was happy to see my van back in the driveway. With a little prep and a daily read i was on my way to work where i poured a cup of coffee for Pauly. He has a "non-driver" ID because he's not allowed to drive. He yells when he talks, and if he doesn't know the answer to a question like, "What time do you get out of work?" He says, "STEVE, WHAT TIME DO I GET OUT OF WORK!?" Steve will answer, "You get off at five Pauly." I always thought Steve was his father. He said that when pauly was 16 he let him drive and it cost him 1000$ worth of damage. I don't think Steve is Pauly's father, because if he was Pauly would call him dad. Pauly asked me to hang out. He "sings" and wants to rock out. I don't want to be mean, but i'm hesitant to call.

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16 Comments

legs legsFounder ·

I really like your writing style...very impressed

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nine9starOG 2001 ·

ha ha i loved it buttttttt having studied english language can i point out the repetition of "myself" and "onto something" on line 4 don't help the flow of the passage - just a bit of contructive criticism

But yeah i agree u have a cool writing style

g.f.s.rocks g.f.s.rocksOG 2001 ·

nag nag nag.....thats all you do.....

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nine9starOG 2001 ·

grrrrrrrr ha ha ha not naggin not naggin lol

bennybergs13 bennybergs13OG 2001 ·

You're right "It doesn't take a beautiful guy to win over a great girl." To me beautiful guys are annoying. I hate how now a days guys are worried about the amount of gel thats in their hair and stuff like that. WHy can't guys be guys ARGH FARGH, but a guy must have "guy humor"

magnum magnumOG 2001 ·

yeah i hate way in don't have enough gel in my hair, oh wait i shave my hair with a #2 attachment for my razor. Oh well! Never was into that pretty boy image :/

bennybergs13 bennybergs13OG 2001 ·

thats a + 10 for you!

ballyhoo ballyhooOG 2001 ·

Yea, but when guys ARE guys then girls complain anyway. so why cant girls just not be little complaining machines? huh? huh? just like a guy for who he is. not for how much gel he does or doesnt put in his hair. In short, some guys use gel, some don't.

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rocksupastarFounder ·

yea... you are showing why some guys get sick of GIRLS!!!! AND TURN TO BEING GAY!!!!!!!!!! thats what happened to the funky fresh.. i mean... girls just nag and nag about every little thing, he couldnt take it anymore and just snapped... i hope ur HAPPY!

ballyhoo ballyhooOG 2001 ·

FIGHT THE POWER!!

thefunkyfresh thefunkyfreshFounder ·

shush, i'm not gay. i just havent met a girl yet who's good enough for me... OOOHHHH TALK ABOUT SELF IMAGE! thats right, i'm conceited, whatcha gonna do about it!?

punkprincess punkprincessOG 2001 ·

knock you down. down down to china town.

bennybergs13 bennybergs13OG 2001 ·

I seriously think i understand guys i mean i wouldnt want a guy nagging at me so why would i nag at him...you treat people how you want to be treated...NEIL DIAMOND RULES!!!

legs legsFounder ·

I love him! haha...hes great! "hello Again hello, I just called to say hello..."

bennybergs13 bennybergs13OG 2001 ·

haha we should start a Neil Diamond Fan Club on ezabel! Ahh mabe thats too much

g.f.s.rocks g.f.s.rocksOG 2001 ·

"hello, hello...." hahaha

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