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TheLittleBusWithTheTintedWindows

hollyhox by hollyhox · Mar 2, 2002 · 120 views · Journal

My brother kidnapped my van, forcing me to walk. So with my coat collar flipped up and my hands stuffed in my pockets, i stepped out into the cold. A deep breath of that bitter air tasted great with the lingering sweet touch of wine in my mouth. I took this opportunity of silence to think about everything on my mind. Occasionally when i was onto something, words would leak out and i'd find myself talking to myself. I think i was onto something- It doesn't take a beautiful guy to win over a great girl. I don't think anyway.


when i awoke in the morning i was happy to see my van back in the driveway. With a little prep and a daily read i was on my way to work where i poured a cup of coffee for Pauly. He has a "non-driver" ID because he's not allowed to drive. He yells when he talks, and if he doesn't know the answer to a question like, "What time do you get out of work?" He says, "STEVE, WHAT TIME DO I GET OUT OF WORK!?" Steve will answer, "You get off at five Pauly." I always thought Steve was his father. He said that when pauly was 16 he let him drive and it cost him 1000$ worth of damage. I don't think Steve is Pauly's father, because if he was Pauly would call him dad. Pauly asked me to hang out. He "sings" and wants to rock out. I don't want to be mean, but i'm hesitant to call.

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16 Comments

legs #1 legsFounder

I really like your writing style...very impressed

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#2 nine9starOG 2001

ha ha i loved it buttttttt having studied english language can i point out the repetition of "myself" and "onto something" on line 4 don't help the flow of the passage - just a bit of contructive criticism

But yeah i agree u have a cool writing style

g.f.s.rocks #2.1 g.f.s.rocksOG 2001

nag nag nag.....thats all you do.....

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#2.1.1 nine9starOG 2001

grrrrrrrr ha ha ha not naggin not naggin lol

bennybergs13 #3 bennybergs13OG 2001

You're right "It doesn't take a beautiful guy to win over a great girl." To me beautiful guys are annoying. I hate how now a days guys are worried about the amount of gel thats in their hair and stuff like that. WHy can't guys be guys ARGH FARGH, but a guy must have "guy humor"

magnum #3.1 magnumOG 2001

yeah i hate way in don't have enough gel in my hair, oh wait i shave my hair with a #2 attachment for my razor. Oh well! Never was into that pretty boy image :/

bennybergs13 #3.1.1 bennybergs13OG 2001

thats a + 10 for you!

ballyhoo #3.2 ballyhooOG 2001

Yea, but when guys ARE guys then girls complain anyway. so why cant girls just not be little complaining machines? huh? huh? just like a guy for who he is. not for how much gel he does or doesnt put in his hair. In short, some guys use gel, some don't.

rocksupastar #3.2.1 rocksupastarFounder

yea... you are showing why some guys get sick of GIRLS!!!! AND TURN TO BEING GAY!!!!!!!!!! thats what happened to the funky fresh.. i mean... girls just nag and nag about every little thing, he couldnt take it anymore and just snapped... i hope ur HAPPY!

ballyhoo #3.2.1.1 ballyhooOG 2001

FIGHT THE POWER!!

thefunkyfresh #3.2.1.2 thefunkyfreshFounder

shush, i'm not gay. i just havent met a girl yet who's good enough for me... OOOHHHH TALK ABOUT SELF IMAGE! thats right, i'm conceited, whatcha gonna do about it!?

punkprincess punkprincessOG 2001

knock you down. down down to china town.

bennybergs13 #3.2.2 bennybergs13OG 2001

I seriously think i understand guys i mean i wouldnt want a guy nagging at me so why would i nag at him...you treat people how you want to be treated...NEIL DIAMOND RULES!!!

legs #3.2.2.1 legsFounder

I love him! haha...hes great! "hello Again hello, I just called to say hello..."

bennybergs13 bennybergs13OG 2001

haha we should start a Neil Diamond Fan Club on ezabel! Ahh mabe thats too much

g.f.s.rocks g.f.s.rocksOG 2001

"hello, hello...." hahaha

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